This term our writing focus is to inform or persuade. We are using Sheena Cameron's 'Hamburger' model to understand the steps necessary for effective writing. The analogy :
- the top bun represents the introduction, the 'first bite' of the topic
- the 'fillings' represent the new ideas linked to the main topic, and their elaboration.
- the more fillings there are the greater the number of ideas are being presented to the reader
- the bottom bun is the summary or conclusion, and should restate the most important ideas.
Our informative writing will be about 'The Human Machine'- looking forward to some great posts. Here is an early example from Kat, with a definition, learning intention and success criteria.
Informative writing
Analogy - A hamburger has two tasty buns either side of the ingredients. Informative writing is similar - the buns are the introduction and summary, and the ingredients are the facts or evidence and their supporting details in your writing.
WALT: write informatively on a given subject and provide supporting details.
S.C:
- Have a clear introduction and summary
- Use time-related words to link and sequence ideas
- Use specific detail to support explanation.
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